X Alta is the Mecca for every women who are in the forefront of fashion in dress.
Tim says:
This sign has so many mistakes! The biggest mistake in the first sentence is that “every” should be used with a singular form — so not “women”, but “woman.” Also “in dress” is completely unnecessary — “fashion” generally means “fashion in clothes.”
O Alta is the Mecca for every woman is who in the forefront of fashion.
X To be what I am, to enjoy my own style makes it happy everyday.
You should say that it makes “you” happy, not makes “it” happy! Also, “every day” should be two words here, because it’s a noun. (As an adjective, it would be one word.)
O To be what I am, to enjoy my own style, makes me happy every day.
周囲にある英語を見て、果たしてそれが正しい英語なのだろうかと感じる英語はありますか？「あの英語は絶対に間違っている」という英語の表記はありますか？看板の写真を撮って、Machigai.comに送りましょう！とんでもない英語だったら、このコーナーで出します！
